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  • Committer: Teddy Hogeborn
  • Date: 2019-04-10 20:28:41 UTC
  • Revision ID: teddy@recompile.se-20190410202841-wryp37oxea5cjo43
Improve language in intro(8mandos) manual page

* intro.xml (INTRODUCTION): Replace "it" with "the password" to
                            improve clarity, and fix "root file" to
                            "root file system".

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<!DOCTYPE refentry PUBLIC "-//OASIS//DTD DocBook XML V4.5//EN"
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"http://www.oasis-open.org/docbook/xml/4.5/docbookx.dtd" [
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<!ENTITY COMMANDNAME "mandos">
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<!ENTITY TIMESTAMP "2019-07-24">
 
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<!ENTITY TIMESTAMP "2019-02-10">
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<!ENTITY % common SYSTEM "common.ent">
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%common;
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      </varlistentry>
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      <varlistentry>
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        <term>
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          <ulink url="https://www.avahi.org/">Avahi</ulink>
 
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          <ulink url="http://www.avahi.org/">Avahi</ulink>
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        </term>
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      <listitem>
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        <para>