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  • Committer: Teddy Hogeborn
  • Date: 2019-04-10 20:28:41 UTC
  • mto: This revision was merged to the branch mainline in revision 384.
  • Revision ID: teddy@recompile.se-20190410202841-wryp37oxea5cjo43
Improve language in intro(8mandos) manual page

* intro.xml (INTRODUCTION): Replace "it" with "the password" to
                            improve clarity, and fix "root file" to
                            "root file system".

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<?xml version="1.0" encoding="UTF-8"?>
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<!DOCTYPE refentry PUBLIC "-//OASIS//DTD DocBook XML V4.5//EN"
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"http://www.oasis-open.org/docbook/xml/4.5/docbookx.dtd" [
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<!ENTITY TIMESTAMP "2019-03-30">
 
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<!ENTITY TIMESTAMP "2019-04-10">
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<!ENTITY % common SYSTEM "common.ent">
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%common;
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]>
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    </para>
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    <para>
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      So, at boot time, the Mandos client will ask for its encrypted
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      data over the network, decrypt it to get the password, use it to
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      decrypt the root file, and continue booting.
 
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      data over the network, decrypt it to get the password, use the
 
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      password to decrypt the root file system, and continue booting.
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    </para>
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    <para>
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      Now, of course the initial RAM disk image is not on the